I like the ending a lot , great poem !!!

That was really good, as usual... I love how I can relate to all your poems... they have a sense of truth and reality...
loved it... 5/5

Much Love,
Ipsita

0hh an0ther beautifully written piece. great j0b hun! t0uching lines-great use 0f w0rds.
l0tz 0f l0ve /d0ra

Hey woooow that was awsome loved it
goooddd onn u mate
keep up the good job me here if u want to talk aight?

always smile
peaceeeee

That was a great poem. i can relate to it like other people said.

Aaaaaaawwwww kumar i love this poem out of all. its got passion,dreams,goals,sadness,its got all ur emotions its perfect. i wish ur love comes bck to you and relizes how much love u will give to her. also merry xmas n hope u have a great new year. 5/5 actually i wud give it an A++++

Beautiful poem, Kumar. Thank you for your comments and votes. Have a great Christmas!

Awwww......... great poem......
thank you for that (5)

Hi kumar
i do love reading ur poems. and waiting 4 more poems from ur side.
bharti

Damn that was... FABULOUS

I LOVE YOUR POEM KUMAR. YOU'RE SO AWESOME.

Awww dats really sweet, and sad. but it is nice. filled with emotion and feeling and passion. 5/5 - ttyl kumar

Superbly written! your emotions seem to pour straight out!

great work. take care. good luck and keep writing.

vazthukkal
shobhana