Hey i rly liked it alot!5/5. great work

Hey gurl that was really good, it was pretty deep keep up the good work.

Hey,
wow a great poem, really touching, I think that the end was great, the flow is good and its easy to read, keep up the good work 5/5
take care
kisses stephanie

5/5 great poem. thanks for commenting mine

Damn thats rough. But its good 5/5

Good work!...choice of words is good.
Nice job on this 1
kp it up!
xxPoojaxx

Hey gurl i love this poem keep it up its great

Thats a really nice poem, congrats btw :) its a gr8 peice kp it up