I loved ur poem... it was so full of emotion and powerfully stong descriptive words, its very uniqu n easy to understand, keep up the work 5/5 xoxoxox

I really liked this poem great write...Joc

Oh wow, this is amazing. it's a really good analogy and it's very beautifully written. good job.

I love the poem. It is written very well. You can really feel the thoughts and feelings in the poems.

*Try to comment "that one"*
jess

Amazing work once again you are incredibly skilled and I enjoy reading all of your work

All the Best
Sondos

Great poem, I really like it! 5/5 =]

natz x0x

Nice one, good metaphor. 5/5. Sorry for the short comment but don't have time for more right now; gotta go to bed.

That is wonderful! Truely great! 5/5

I like it, i think its good

Hey I loved it, good job!! Keep it up :)

I like it....Why do you cap every single word? lol just wondering.

I like it....Why do you cap every single word? lol just wondering.

Good job. I love the symbolism you used in the poem. 5/5
-Vino

Oh wow, this is really amazing, great analogy and flow. i love it. its a shame the rating only goes to 5.