He Has

by Ike Dizzle   Dec 10, 2005


He has a shoulder for me to cry on when I am down
Arms for when I am afraid
Hands to hold me as much as I need
And ears when I need attention or aid
He has trust that I will not break
Feelings for me in his heart
A special place in my life
And we shall never drift apart
He is humorous and makes me laugh
He has comments to lift me up
He believes in me and things I do
And our love cannot fit in a cup
He has strength to get me over obstacles
And it seems our feelings shall get us by
The only thing I hope I never have to do is
To say goodbye.
(my teacher asked me to write a poem about her relationship so this is for her)

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  • 16 years ago

    by pLeASeTakEMyHeArT

    It's so nice to do for others, it mean u are understandable, you kno wat is feel like, put da vision what she telling you abt herself and her relationship.. U just put it out and make it good.. I've wrote some for my friends that adore me in their thought of paper not to forget.. So this is pretty nicee.

  • 18 years ago

    by *~Emma~*

    Lol, that's sweet, i'm sure she liked it too? you did a grat job describing someone elses feelings.
    luv em

  • 18 years ago

    by Void

    Hey! To answer your question, I am a song writer, I started that way and wasn't completely satisfied with my work and I thought if I came to a site like this with other writers and wrote poetry to help me with vocabulary and imagery it would do some good..Anyway though, the reason I came here was to return the favour of all your comments. thankyou very much for them, and as for your work, so far I really like it. The fact that a teacher asked you to do it and it wasn't something that you were caught up in yourself and were still able to write about it so well, that's awesome! I admire people who can do that, I'm going to read more and comment more when I get the time because I am interested to see what else you have to offer in your work. I can see that you are very talented. See 'round the site :)

  • 18 years ago

    by Lenny

    Its nice to write poems for other people and its rewarding aswell. I bet she loved it.