by Megann Lee Dec 10, 2005
category :
Sadness, depression /
grieving, loss
A broken dream, that never lasted. |
by MudkipzPlx
Ohwow..Lovely Poem Megan. |
by Kaylee
Good concept and messsage but you had a few spelling errors and it kept repeating what happened ot the mother and father instead of maybe focusing on the man's guilt or describing the event in enough detail to leave us astounded about how much reality there is in this. But you got your message across without over doing it and that is important. |
Very well written and portrayed. |
by LuVlYlUfFlY
Good poem i really like it keep it up u could go a long way 5/5 |
by Darien
Well I haven't lost anyone to drunk driving, but I know some people that have. Six boys, all in a band, have lost someone they loved to drunk driving. The named their band, Die Driving. In memory of those. Very nice poem. |