This is such a good poem! It's so sad that drunk drivers kill innocents and get away with it. 5!
-Kristin

Really really good poem i hope nothing like this happpened to anyone you know, i would hate for it to happen to one of my m8s or family. xxx

Great poem, great message!

This was such a powerful poem. You showed the message of what drink-driving does in such a meaningful way.
xxx

Well I haven't lost anyone to drunk driving, but I know some people that have. Six boys, all in a band, have lost someone they loved to drunk driving. The named their band, Die Driving. In memory of those. Very nice poem.

Good poem i really like it keep it up u could go a long way 5/5

Very well written and portrayed.

5/5

Good concept and messsage but you had a few spelling errors and it kept repeating what happened ot the mother and father instead of maybe focusing on the man's guilt or describing the event in enough detail to leave us astounded about how much reality there is in this. But you got your message across without over doing it and that is important.

Ohwow..Lovely Poem Megan.

Love MKKA!