by libby Dec 10, 2005
category :
Love, romance /
desired love
The quiet languor in his eyes... |
by Jason Meres
The ability you have to so wrap your head around words and write them in such a way as i'm seeing here is rare and enchanting. If I had the time tonight i'd read every word you've written. And believe me, I mean that. I wish I had your talent. |
by firexflys
I like it i kidnd got that maybe you could be what he has been looking for. nice job i like it 5.5 |
Jesus. What a great poem. I usually dislike love poems, mostly because no one can properly fulfill such an arduous task. You, on the other hand, did it wonderfully. |