Jesus. What a great poem. I usually dislike love poems, mostly because no one can properly fulfill such an arduous task. You, on the other hand, did it wonderfully.

Another great work from you,
I'll return soon enough to see more

Christa

I like it i kidnd got that maybe you could be what he has been looking for. nice job i like it 5.5

The ability you have to so wrap your head around words and write them in such a way as i'm seeing here is rare and enchanting. If I had the time tonight i'd read every word you've written. And believe me, I mean that. I wish I had your talent.