This is really, really, really, good. I loved it ma....great poem!!!!

::MELI::

Don't get me wrong...i love all of ur other poems...bu this one is the BEST THAT U HAVE EVER written..it has truly touched me because i feel the same way right now...my baby pulled me to me feet and then i cried a million happi tears...this is the best one ever and thanks 4 ur support on my poems...5/5...keep it up...

GREAT POEMS..Keep ur head up...! and HAPPY HOLIDAYS...:D..take care and once again thanks for commenting on my poems..:D
love yah chika...

WOW GREAT POEM!! IT IS ONE OF THE BEST POEMS THAT I EVER READ HERE...10/10!!! KEEP THE GREAT WORK UP..

That was so good tiny! u just keep getting better all the time darls!!! *hugs* really beautiful.... I loved the words I loved the rhymes I love the way it runs..... its really lovely.....

Hey nik! thats what i was waiting for lol it was awesome keep it up hun

Beautiful as usual

Nikki i really love this one!! its gotta be my favorite one of yours so far!! Your awesome at writing! And your an inspiration, just like the songs we put in our cell phones! lol!
VaL

Awww this was soooo beautiful!! It really touched me and it had so much emotion into it!! The words were seriously dancing on my screen cuz they flowed so well!!!
luv jess xoxo

Great work you use of words is excellent keep it up hun xox rc

AHHH!!! lol i luv it!! Damn gurl u can rite!

Wow this poem is absolutely amazing it was like so beautiful it brought a tear to my eye i really wish i had your talent the poem jsut flows and is perfect

lots of love
*~*Becky*~*

Hey well i love it and its realy good and hope it gose far cuz its realy good i gav ot a 5

Wow that's extremely good, makes me wonder how in hell you could say that mine were good.
well done keep writing

Omg i love it! so sweet and sad but HAPPY!! really nice ending..keep it up

Thanks for the comment
your poem just is incredible
i love how youve set it out and written it
keep up the good work
and keep writting

luv bianca

Wow!..that poem was simply beautiful!...and P.S thanks for commenting on my poem!..

Hey thnx for the awesome comment!

awesum poem ! il tell him hw i feel :)

sarah xxxxxx

Great work.

I've often felt like that.

Wow i loved it it was so great keep up the good work!!!!!!!!!!!!