Wow... i absolutly loved it!!!! it was amazing... you have phenominal talent... keep it up!

sammie

Hey! I saw your post in the forum bored asking for someone to check out your work and tell you where you are with it, and I've read some of your older things, and some of your newer things, and I'd just like to say that you've accomplished alot with these poems, you get feeling across, there's nice smooth rhythm and a rhyme scheme that fits perfectly. You've improved lots,and believe me if there's anyone on the right road (path to totally awesomeness! lol) it's you. I have no complaints about your writing, I love it all. (I'm quite the sucker for love poems :P) Brilliant pieces :)

Wow i love it! you are a great writer! and that is how i want to be proposed to..in a poem...its so romantic

Capitalization of things might be nice, but it's sweet. It reminds me of this guy I know (the way its expressed, I mean). Good job.

OMG!!!!! That is so sweet. I'm actually starting to cry. This is so beautiful, Tim. Whoever she is, she is really lucky.

This is sooooooo....beautiful . You just described the things that I've been waiting all my life to hear . You really touched my heart with this, and I'm sure every women out there who believes in love . You're terrific, brilliant, poetry is in you . 5/5