Hey Jackie,

I just read your comment on a girls poem. You said "well I just think you did this to get comments" Cause she said: comment or else Ill die.

Im very upset. hah! No I'm sorry, I am kiddin. Just F*ing with ya. haha, I read that and thought: hah! that's a person with attitude! So I decided to read what ya got ;)

Looks good! Very good actually. I can also relate to it.. I wish I couldnt hah.. But ye.. whatever. Very well writin. Nice use of words. Easy to read. Not complicated. Hmm.. I give you full point. 5/5. I loved it Jackie.

Please, keep up the good work! You are a talented writer. I can't wait for more.

Lotsa love,
Take care,
-xxx-

Excellent! yeah, i can relate.

I still think it's an exellent poem. you did a great job on it. keep up the good work.

Again, a sweet, simple plea with a hint of sadness, but mostly quiet resignation. Well captured indeed.

This is sooo sad and it touched my heart. I hope your wish comes true =0) Please keep your head up high and keep writing....Great poem indeed..

Much Love Sabrina

It seems your root depression is your dad not being around. I"m sorry darling and wish things to be better. Another well written piece of work, god you're a fantastic writer.

This is such a simple poem yet so charged with emotion. I love the way it is written as a letter to Santa where you would expect something like a request for a bike. I loved the last stanza it is so heartfelt.
Great writing keep going

p.s. glad my poems make you smile