WOW ! This is a EXCELLENT poem . You captured my full attention ..I must read more of you work...keep up the good work..5/5..xoxo

Excellent hun just excellent xox

Hey sweets your poem was bomb thats a great poem i give it a 5 all the way check out my new poem love ya always BabyGurl

That was cool. The ending lines were great. Good job on the words.
~DFTI≈

Wow..This was.... very very good

Loved the words of this poem, it kept me on the tip of my toes and the ending was extrodinary. I also have read some of your other poems too. Your good can't wait until you write some more.

Hey swets you look so diferent thanks it will i know we are engaged to be marry in june of next year and a baby on its way you look really cute in your pic keep up the good work!!!!!!!!!

I loved this poem! The ending was especially excellent!

I enjoyed reading this poem and I think you got point across very well. my
favorite part is you never caught my
fall.......Shelby

Awesome poem

Very nice poem... For I am the victim of the love YOU tore apart!
was my favorite line, and I could feel your emotions... 5/5

Awesome Poem, all I want to say about it has been said already. But Its great.

Good lord, when you said the part about how you never caught my fall, it really put a resounding puch to the whole and placed a tone of finality over it all...my god, shadowed, you're brilliant, I can relate to everything you write about...extraordinary!

Ugh, this is really saaaaaad....
and really gooooooood..........
ha... well, w/e it is, its working, u r truly, very talented.
keep it up, i LOVE ur poems!

5/5

love
tina
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