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by Rich   Dec 10, 2005


How does love start, does it ever end
Can real lovers also be friends
How can it be that I feel so alone
Like my heart has turned cold and hard as a stone

I've opened my life and showed you my soul
But why am I empty and why am I not whole
I search from inside and look in my life
I have no reason to feel like this with all of this strife

I long for the feel of your gentle warm hand
Long romantic walks with our feet in the sand
I dream of our lives and becoming one
Of dancing and laughing under the sun

But why does this feeling of sadness appear
When all I want is to have you so near
Could there be sadness lurking below
Could it be a curse and cruel wicked blow

That fate is laughing from somewhere unseen
That mocks our love and calls it obscene
I look to the heavens and look for a sign
But all just answer that everything is fine

I fear for the future and fear the unknown
But push on like a sail full of the wind blown
I follow the master, like I follow the sea
I pray that your love never dies for me

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  • 18 years ago

    by loretta Taylor

    Rich, what a beautiful poem. I don't know if this is a life experience, but I have felt the same way. Keep up your writing. You are amazing. I am adding you to my favorites. 5/5 Loretta

  • 18 years ago

    by smile

    Wow this is really touching
    such a beautifully worded poem
    yet at the same time sad.
    i can really relate to similar issues.

    Thank you very much for the lovely comment you left me. it was greatly appreciated, it was so so sweet and made me happy!!!!

    You are really talented and will go far...you just know it!

    **smile**

  • 18 years ago

    by Christine

    Wow........OMG thats soooooooo sad that is the saddest one yet,='( your like the best poet everyyy your like the most perfect writter you should totally make your own books,than i would buy them all and read them all the time.
    and i hope you're gonig to be okay..dont feel lonely though you've got me =)))..

    ~XoXoChristineXoXo~

  • 18 years ago

    by Torn

    Another great poem...it didnt let me comment earlier:'(!!
    your words are so profound and show just how amazing you are..
    dont ever stop writing, reading them just fills me up with such joy.
    Much love, anna xoxo

  • 18 years ago

    by Cheyanne

    Awwww thiz poemz so sweet n itz diffrent another gr8 poem!!!!! ur n amazin writer!!!! keep up tha gud work ur doin gr8!!!!5/5

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