My Promise

by Rich   Dec 10, 2005


Holding your hand and the touch of your skin
Shutting my eyes and just breathing you in
I've waited so long for our souls to touch
My heart is yours, how I love you so much

The scars of our life don't need to be told
As long as you're here for me to hold
I give you my life and all that I am
My dreams and my love and by you I will stand

You've given me hope, you've given me love
Like an angel from God sent from above
I give you my promise and give you my life
I long for the day I make you my wife

Our love will grow strong, our love will endure
Our love is holy, forever and pure
I cherish your love, I cherish your soul
Baby I love you, you make me whole

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  • 18 years ago

    by loretta Taylor

    Beautifully written. Its a lucky lady that you have written this for. Such a sweet . tender write. Loved it
    5/5
    Always Loretta

  • 18 years ago

    by loretta Taylor

    Wow, powerful stuff. Wow a Marine with a tender heart. Your wife/girlfriend is a lucky woman. that should have been a wedding vow. Adding you to my favorites

  • 18 years ago

    by Cheyanne

    Wow this is a beautiful and heartfelt poem.....i exspecially love the way you've written it....you obviously have talent.... well keep up the good work your doing great:) o ye and thx for the comment on my poem very much appreciated:)

  • 18 years ago

    by lana

    YOUR POEM IS BEAUTIFUL AND VERY OUT SPOKEN
    I LOVE IT
    YOU SHOWED US FEELINGS
    I LIKED IT
    5/5

    FROM LANA

  • 18 years ago

    by Nee

    OoPs, best poem I've read for today!
    its sorta old thou,lol
    but so greatly written and touching lines!
    I adore every stanza
    that was really amazing you really shud keep that up! you really impressed me (I'm not praising, the is the truth)
    Keep it up
    Best Of Luck
    NemO x0x0x0x0x0x

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