by *fading*away* Dec 10, 2005
category :
Friendship, family /
goodbye
One day, a butterfly will fly in loops |
by brkendown
Very good! keep up the good writes! |
by ..eliSa*
Very well written..its rare for me to enjoy reading a poem that doesnt rhyme but this one was definatly very well done!! i like the 3rd lass verse a lot, especially because i can relate to every line, every word..very wlel done once again! keep it up!! |
by herewithme
Brilliant! |
by ..eliSa*
This poem is absolutly increadable..i especially loved the ending..brilliant! keep up the good work and be proud of yourself! |