This poem is absolutly increadable..i especially loved the ending..brilliant! keep up the good work and be proud of yourself!

Brilliant!
thts all i can say...brilliant
keep up the GREAT work

Very well written..its rare for me to enjoy reading a poem that doesnt rhyme but this one was definatly very well done!! i like the 3rd lass verse a lot, especially because i can relate to every line, every word..very wlel done once again! keep it up!!

Very good! keep up the good writes!
5/5 ashley