My Fault

by crystaljean88   Dec 11, 2005


I never thought this would happen,
I lost it all by the count of ten.

I told everyone that it was me you wouldn't leave,
The pain i have caused you is hard to see or even believe.

How can this happen to me and you?
It hurts me to think of all the s**t i put you through.

Its all my fault for the reasons your no longer here,
In your future life, please baby have no fear.

For i never meant to hurt you and i want you to be OK,
Please don't do nothing stupid to stop you from seeing the light of another day.

Its all my fault and i truly regret what i done,
But you left me and you have every good reason.

I love you baby but i know you may not believe me,
Good luck to you and please try to be happy.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    "your no longer here," =You're

    "i"=I

    "For i never meant to hurt you and i want you to be OK,
    Please don't do nothing stupid to stop you from seeing the light of another day."

    ^^I thought the flow was terribly off in this couplet...maybe try something like

    For I never did mean to hurt you and I just want you to be OK,
    Don't do nothing stupid to stop you from seeing each day.

    I found this to incredibly sweet. Sad yes, but still written with such emotion and depth that it shows your love for the person whom you're writing to.

  • 17 years ago

    by Michelle

    Gurl love the poem keep it up 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Brittany C

    Very sad yet I don't know it was just a great poem. I gave it a 5/5.

  • 18 years ago

    by Michelle

    Gurl as usual alsome i loved it, and it was really touching to.5.0!

  • 18 years ago

    by Cheyanne

    Awwww thiz poems so sweet n sad but very gud lol keep up tha gud work ur doin gr8!!!!5/5

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