by Void Dec 11, 2005
category :
Life, society /
other
There he lay with spirit half broken, |
Is it the aircraft crashing part that is an accident and not an act of hate? well it doesnt matta coz it still brings forth the same sad feeling that u r attempting to convey throughout the whole poem! i say, well done and keep up the fantastic work! |
Spectacular! i liked it a lot. i'm sorry i finished early, but i guess ur glad coz u won : ) lol |
by LovinMyLife
I think this poem is awesome. It looks like you put a lot of time into it. Awesome job! I love it! keep it up! |
by Ariana
I think this is good, its very descriptive and your ideas are explained well. It's also written very straightforwardly (I just invented a word) which is good because this is quite long, so being able to get a decent understanding of it in the first reading it helpful. Nice piece. |
by Justin
Whoa.... I still have nothing negative to say about your poetry, this is just another fine example of your ability to write, you have an amazing gift, you seem to express yourself through your poems so easily, and thats something not alot of people can due, your exactly right, there is alot of hatred in this word, and there is consequences to face, you summed (sp?) it all up beautifully, Amazing job, 5/5 |