I wish my friend could read this. This relates so.......... much to her. 5/5

Whoa.... I still have nothing negative to say about your poetry, this is just another fine example of your ability to write, you have an amazing gift, you seem to express yourself through your poems so easily, and thats something not alot of people can due, your exactly right, there is alot of hatred in this word, and there is consequences to face, you summed (sp?) it all up beautifully, Amazing job, 5/5

My favorite lines were...
"If society worked together, peace could be found,
The heaven we could create would have love profound."

Very creative and inspirational.

I think this is good, its very descriptive and your ideas are explained well. It's also written very straightforwardly (I just invented a word) which is good because this is quite long, so being able to get a decent understanding of it in the first reading it helpful. Nice piece.

I think this poem is awesome. It looks like you put a lot of time into it. Awesome job! I love it! keep it up!
~SMILES~

Spectacular! i liked it a lot. i'm sorry i finished early, but i guess ur glad coz u won : ) lol
rock on, Suzie

Is it the aircraft crashing part that is an accident and not an act of hate? well it doesnt matta coz it still brings forth the same sad feeling that u r attempting to convey throughout the whole poem! i say, well done and keep up the fantastic work!