Awwww baby
thats is so sad....i know how you feel all this month i've looked death in the eyes just dont let this happen

love you
andrea

Well, I liked the idea and the story, but the poem could be better. it
was good, but not AS good as the other parts, so don't be mad if I only give this a 4/5, I know you can do better. The emotions were perfect.
I'll read more of your poems, your a good poet, I know, but this poem doesn't seem to be one of your best, but it is still good. After reading the other reviews I am thinking that my opinion isn't shared by others, so don't take this as an insult, I may just be mistaken.
keep your head up
dwight

I love this poem. with the way you have such meaning in it. i hope that this is not your end for i would miss you but as you said no tears will bring you back.

love heather