Is This How It Feels

by Lexie   Dec 11, 2005


My heart aches day and night,
Just to be next to you.
I long to talk to you
I dream of your touch.
Is this how it feels?

I need to see you,
Life is unbearable without you.
All I can think about is you,
I can't get you off my mind.
Is this how it feels?

Nothing can go wrong,
Bad days never come.
I wake up smiling,
With everyday we are together.
Is this how it feels?

Life just gets better,
For each day is with you.
I can't describe the feeling,
Can this possibly be real?
Is this how it feels,
To find the love of your life?

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  • 18 years ago

    by Wasted Fake Smiles

    Excellent work...i love your poetry..u have a splendid gift...i hope u use it throughout your life 5/5
    ~*Who Cares?*~

  • 18 years ago

    by Nici

    There is a lot of emotion in this poem.

    To be honest the repition of the word you, got really annoying after a while. That's just my opinion though. I think I would have looked for different words to use or ways to phrase the lines so that 'you' doesn't end so many of them.

    I still liked the feeling of the poem though, I'm just being picky.

    Keep writing
    Nici

  • 18 years ago

    by Raven Roth

    :) I liked that. Someday I hope for that.

  • 18 years ago

    by RetiCent

    Very beautiful poem! Keep up the good work 5/5

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