Very beautiful poem! Keep up the good work 5/5

:) I liked that. Someday I hope for that.

There is a lot of emotion in this poem.

To be honest the repition of the word you, got really annoying after a while. That's just my opinion though. I think I would have looked for different words to use or ways to phrase the lines so that 'you' doesn't end so many of them.

I still liked the feeling of the poem though, I'm just being picky.

Keep writing
Nici

Excellent work...i love your poetry..u have a splendid gift...i hope u use it throughout your life 5/5
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