by Angie
A beautiful friendship indeed...... one to be treasured. |
by Simon Hayes
Yes yes - Bill, yet again you have put a smile on my face and a warmth in my heart. You truly have a way with words and you obviously have a very special friend. Well done :) |
That's great. It explain so much. Keep up the good work. |
Every time I read your poems...I just endup speechless. Your poems touch my heart in ways that I'm not able to explain. This was an amazing poem (u know why), Thanks for sharing it with us. 5/5 |
by Chelsey
Bill, this poem touched my heart! I love seeing men write poems like these..a lot of guys I know have a hard time expressing their feelings, but you, you have not only a gift of poetry, but a gift of words..you always know the right things to say! Even though I like to pick on you like I do my own dad, I admire you for that! Wonderful write!! |
by Ann Stareyes
Bill |
Bill, |
by Cuddles
I love the fourth stanza. |
by Bill Turner
Emily, when you post something I will gladly review it and offer input. If you write, and write from the heart, with all that you are, you know all you need to about poetry. Poems are an expression of ideas and emotions. Write what you feel and never let anyone tell you otherwise. |
by Darien
Bill, this is a very well written poem. It is always good to keep our friends close. When we write of friends, they always seem so wonderful, but to them, you are just as wonderful. |
by dora
0h that was reall y0god. that was beautiful g0od j0b keep it up!! |