This is really good
how youve used youreself metaphorically
youre really talented :)
i like ure loneliness poem 2
its a bit like 1 ive written
that loneliness is a curse 1

I liked that alot and i just got out of a frendship that made me feel that way so i kno emotion well. that wwas a grrt poem...keep writing...
love ya lots,
sore