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by Becky   Dec 11, 2005


Although you may think
that you know the feeling
that you know what its like
to walk in my shoes

well you don't
you see
my life is different
just as yours is

you may thinks yours is worse
and i may say the same
but its all just what you make of it

some people think their lives are a mess
when really they just don't know how to deal

well i lost my train of though so i might go back and do it again but i dunno comment anyway.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Mezmeryz

    WOW..A GREAT START..I THINK ITS ALRITE AS IT IS ACTULY..ITS GREAT!

  • 18 years ago

    by firexflys

    Well the though was good i hope you decide to go back and and end the poem nice job

  • 18 years ago

    by xEmmax

    Hey, its good, i can see where ur going with it. try and add to it if u can, but good work!
    take care,
    luv emxxxx