This is good, the way you ended it was excellent!! 5/5
xox CrAzY xox

Hey! I came to read this poem mostly because it got your lowest rating and I thought I'd check it out. Frankly, I don't understand why you only got a 4, i gave you a 5/5, for the reasons that you have good rhythm, nice rhyme scheme with great flow, and well, you got your point across ( no matter how crazy :P)... My only thought of why you might have gotten only 4 was maybe the swear word (?) lol I really don't know, but I do know that some people either take that offensively or simply believe that swearing shows weakness. I, however, think it caught your moment.. so umm, yeah i guess I'm contradicting myself a bit... lol my bad, anyway the point was to say that it's really good, great job!

I guess i'm crazy b/c this is exactly how i feel but dont tell nobody ;)

n-e-ways great poem 5/5!

Hey another gr8 poem!! And thnx for the comment on my poem, I no I am bit late in doing urs, sorry!! But I love ur poems!!

This is a good poem, but I don't think that it's one of your best. It has a lot of grammer and spelling error's that you should edit and it really didn't hold my attention much because the flow wasn't as good as the other ones. This poem actually seems rushed and I am not going to rate it because I didn't really get. Keep writing.

Best wishes
Letty

I liked this.
It has a lot of spelling errors that need to be fixed.
But I enjoyed the imageryy, wording and flow.
I also liked the way you ended it.