Comments : What i want

  • 18 years ago

    by TinyDancer46

    Omg. I love this poem. I can relate to it entirely, and it was really easy to read. Your rhyming pattern was flawless, and it flowed well. Great job hunni, keep up the good work! =)

  • 18 years ago

    by UnspokenDream

    Good poem
    J