Hmmm, it's quite good. i like the old style english. it makes it more classical. that's awesome.

with love, Suzie
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I loved this style of writing. I thought the flow was flawless. Choice of words just excellent. I really enjoy your style, I may have said it before but you do have a real talent. Keep up the good work. I look forward to reading more from you.

Check out my latest poem "A Lasting Love" let me know what you think.

Kisses
Hayley

Very powerful. i thought it was an exellent poem, and i loved the words used. thanks for the comments!

Ruby

Vrry powerful words..nice style. Keep writn' ur good. XXLISSA

Hmmm i notice i havent commented..hmmm
anywho, i thought it was superb.
love it and you
~Emah
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