by Emma
Woah...This was really beautifully written i loved every bit of it... i can relate i think it has sooo much emotion in it aswell ... well done hunny... |
by TinyDancer46
Oh my gosh I got chills from this poem! I love how the beginning was so sad, sounding as if you had given all hope, and then how there was a twist at the end. I'm happy for ya hun! The only advice I could give you is to edit this part: |