Comments : Perfect

  • 18 years ago

    by TinyDancer46

    You ask for the impossible,
    smart, pretty and kind.
    You look for it everywhere,
    yet nothing you find.

    I love the way you wrote that part! And I love the way you wrote the rest of this poem too! It's so true.... Guys think girls have to be the whole works: Beautiful, perfect body, perfect hair... and the list goes on and on. You did a great job with this poem, hunni =)

  • 18 years ago

    by megan

    Wow I loved it, so true! xx

  • 18 years ago

    by an endless sky

    Ur so right go gulr go