Awww so sweet... great poem! Beautifully wrtten..

Holy cow! This is absolutely amazing!! One of the best christmas poems I've ever read in my life. I love the way you wrote this, it is really sweet and romantic... and I hope that santa brings you that special person =)

Really good. I like it lots. Thanks for sharing...it was nice to read something like this...holiday season is here! 5/5 Great job.

Great poem! Very sweet! Keep it up Simon!

.:Samara:.

People get so caught up in writing poems for the one they love at Christmas time that I think it can take away from the poem as they tend to say too much at times. The simplicity in this is wonderful...simply saying I want you...was brilliant! I love this poem...I read your thread in the club about you not being able to write...you're forcing yourself...you'll never beable to write if you force it just let it go...you'll be sitting somewhere and then BOOM it'll come to you...just relax...Happy Holidays....take care!!

Beautifully written, I know you'll get that gift.......

Nice poem, good job