Only the real is true, only the real lasts

by Becky   Dec 11, 2005


Well when i wrote this poem i had just drawn a picture but i can't put it on here loll but it kinda gos with it, it was a face half of it was smiling and the other half sad and crying

why do i wear this smile
it does me no good

i think it will make it easy
it will make it all better

but it never does
it just digs me deeper
into this pit I've fallen in
that I've been digging since day one

i use these smiles
as steps to get out

i always get close to the top
so close to the top
i could see the light
feel its warmth bathing my face

and then they crumbled
something fake
never lasts

the only things that last
are real
are true

so i say forget the smile
the fake

I'm gonna let myself show

please comment i always comment back thanks

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  • I love this poem soo much and i now feel like i can let my true feelings show because i always hide what i feel and i always hide what i feel but u shown me that its ok to let ur true feelings show and i look up to u 4 that...keep up the great work...5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by xEmmax

    Wow, this was really good! i can relate. beautiful writing, 5/5 xxxx

  • 18 years ago

    by Mezmeryz

    That was really very good keep it up mate!
    very beautifully deep!
    xxx

  • 18 years ago

    by SammiBABY

    Nicely done! be proud. hope you are having a nice day :)

    sammi x