Nicely done! be proud. hope you are having a nice day :)

sammi x

That was really very good keep it up mate!
very beautifully deep!
xxx

Wow, this was really good! i can relate. beautiful writing, 5/5 xxxx

I love this poem soo much and i now feel like i can let my true feelings show because i always hide what i feel and i always hide what i feel but u shown me that its ok to let ur true feelings show and i look up to u 4 that...keep up the great work...5/5