Wow dean... surprised i didn't no u was into poetry really this is a really really good poem hunny!
Mwah xxxx

This is really good! It shows hardship and victory. It all fits. Great job! 5/5!

Great poem! much propz! =D

Dis is real n i like it keep ur head in da game n don't screw it up

I loved the way the way this poem ending good job, this was very well wrote

That is great...
keep with your dreams... no one can take them away from u... keep them close to your heart and when times get hard just remember u have your dreams
xox robyn

Your poems are so good. They are so short though. I wish they could be longer.
This is a real great poem, keep to your wishes and always try your hardest, I can tell you, that way you will always win in a way.

Dean, you are a fecking legend, i have so much respect for you and your poetry, you are a lyrical genius, id even go as far as saying ur as good as me!! lol nah im just kiddin Dean. You\\\'re not THAT good ;)