Wow...this poem is amazing!!! Its one of the best poems I have read in a long time. Its really touching and I can relate to it closely. Your a great writer. Keep it up! If you get a chance could you comment on some of mine? Thank you. Great job!!!

Your emotions are strong and they come through in you words, i almost cried a tear for you! my situation is similar and maybe thats why your poem appealed to me. wel done!
luv em