Checking into Hell

by beautifuldisaster   Dec 11, 2005


I checked into hell this morning,
hoping to speak with HIM,
but all i got was Sorry but He is not here right now,
please leave your name, number and he'll get back to you ASAP,

I drown myself in thought,
wondering where could he be?
I know not why i am here,
It must be a mistake.

Here I sit tears swelling in my eyes,
A soft touch on my back,
how wonderful it felt,
a little piece of heaven.

I thought to myself,
In hell?
how could this be?
burning souls surround me,
and here i sit,
my own piece of heaven,
it's all i need.

I lost track of all thought,
lost track of all time,
then i look over,
my heaven is gone.

Where could it be?
I miss it so bad,
will it be back,
or was it just another tease.

tears stream down my face,
as i too burn,
a most detestable fate,
Scorched and scalded.

burning inside and out,
could it get any worse than this?
then i realize, it just did,
i look over and theres my heaven,
happy as can be,
without me,
The devil in disguse.

0


Did You Like This Poem?

Latest Comments

  • 18 years ago

    by firexflys

    I was a lil lost in the poem but over all nice job i feel the feeling in it 5.5

  • 18 years ago

    by Mona

    Wonderful poem. I absolutely loved every part of it. The beginnen was sad yet with a sense of humor in it. Very beautiful writin. Very well done -xxx- =)

More Poems By beautifuldisaster