It was very strong in the middle, undoubtedly you have a wonderful gift. With plenty of time, and careful tuning you will learn to keep the flow consistent, heck I remember back to some of my earlier poems I got so annoyed with how they wouldnt end that I destroyed them, Im glad you kept yours and i look forward to your future poems. Great one by the way.

Awwww. well ur savior is here. no need to fear. i love u with all my heart. and we can make new dreams. sweet dreams

Thats gd writin it sad but it 5/5 deffo u hav a gift deffo there girl