Wow..Excellent job! You did really well!
Hey..When you get the chance, check out some of mine!

Great job i gave you a 5 =) put sum more stuff up!!
~courtie x0x0x

Another excellent poem. Keep it up!

Hey
good job!! how longhave you been writing? anyway bottom line

100%

I like this, it is different.

Oohh. this is interesting. I like how it can be interpretted in many different ways. I like the thought of the unhappiness being a dream, or the happiness being a dream, or if either of them were dreams at all. This is a sad but true poem, and I like how at the end you added "We don't have to make things the way we do.", because tht is entirely true. It's all in the matter of the way we see things. This is excellent, my favorite of yours.

I like this poem its well written. a little choppy i admit but i like it a lot!

Wow this one is great! I liked how you put so much emotion into it

Ooo! Nice style. I like it a lot. =) It has a bit of cheerful, and a bit of depression stuff in it lol. It really does resemble me a lot in some ways. The flow was good, and you did an excellent job on the vocab. 5/5 =) xoxo

Samantha

Ohhh. I liked this poem aswell. Seems sad though.. Not sure if you meant it to be? Or not? I don't know. Anyway. Great Job.

Yet another poem. Very deep, great emotion!

This is a excellent poem. You bring such emotion to your writing! Great job!

Wow, very deep. I love how you kept your rhyme scheme. great job! 5/5
=Kat=