Eternally

by ~*You are my only one*~   Dec 11, 2005


Stained like darkness,
On a wounded heart,
She thought that he loved her,
From the very start.

As if she didn't know,
That a heart could bleed,
Her knees hit the ground,
He didn't hear her plead.

No beacon of hope,
Will ever set sail,
Her life has set course,
On this lifelong trail.

To wish for his love,
Was all she could do,
Tears of her sadness,
That he never knew.

Floating down her path,
Of eternal fate,
Finally she came,
To the end of life's gate.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Dreaming_Awake

    Well i have to say that i loved this poem and it was great flowed nilcley and i understand the driffrent ness. ad thanks for the comment

  • 18 years ago

    by Bradley Peter

    Wow! that was brillent. i loved it. i genuinly didn't want it to end. it was very captivating. the words were once again intelligent and creative and we used extremly well. i particularly liked the second and third stanzas. i felt they stood out from the other stanzas because of their raw depth and powerful content. in short, this was a wonderful piece of writing and i hope to see much, much of it. thank you for allowing me to view you writing talent.

    Brad

    P.S. thank you for your comment on my poem 'Dear uncle Chester'. your commets are always appreciated, good or bad.

    P.P.S. if you want to know more about Johnny then read 'the rambles of little Johnny' and 'Tommy and Johnny'.

    P.P.P.S. Tommy and Johnny are both fictional characters on which i shall be writing many stories about in the future

  • 18 years ago

    by Reflection | noitcelfeR

    Wow... this was good :-)

  • 18 years ago

    by She

    Excellent poem. 5/5 keep up the good work. --she

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