Excellent poem. 5/5 keep up the good work. --she

Wow... this was good :-)

Wow! that was brillent. i loved it. i genuinly didn't want it to end. it was very captivating. the words were once again intelligent and creative and we used extremly well. i particularly liked the second and third stanzas. i felt they stood out from the other stanzas because of their raw depth and powerful content. in short, this was a wonderful piece of writing and i hope to see much, much of it. thank you for allowing me to view you writing talent.

Brad

P.S. thank you for your comment on my poem 'Dear uncle Chester'. your commets are always appreciated, good or bad.

P.P.S. if you want to know more about Johnny then read 'the rambles of little Johnny' and 'Tommy and Johnny'.

P.P.P.S. Tommy and Johnny are both fictional characters on which i shall be writing many stories about in the future

Well i have to say that i loved this poem and it was great flowed nilcley and i understand the driffrent ness. ad thanks for the comment