My Failed Attempt

by Katie   Dec 11, 2005


I try to win against this unholy sin
but the fealing when the blade hits my skin
releases the dark pain from deep within
I cant function without it
and so theres no doubt about it
I cannot win

I've tried not to give in
but in the end
I've failed again

I've given up hope
just leave me alone
im addicted
and no one can fix it

** this is my first poem so I know its not that great but please tell me what u think

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  • 18 years ago

    by Torn

    Definately good for a first poem..keep writing and im sure you'll improve heaps.
    take care..
    xoxo

  • 18 years ago

    by *sadbabe*

    Hey i really like it a lot. idk if u r going throught this or not but if u r u need to keep going u cant just stop and give up ive learned that the hard waay. ive been hospitalized 27 times for trying to kill myself

    awesome job keep it up

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