Comments : My Failed Attempt

  • 18 years ago

    by *sadbabe*

    Hey i really like it a lot. idk if u r going throught this or not but if u r u need to keep going u cant just stop and give up ive learned that the hard waay. ive been hospitalized 27 times for trying to kill myself

    awesome job keep it up

  • 18 years ago

    by Torn

    Definately good for a first poem..keep writing and im sure you'll improve heaps.
    take care..
    xoxo