Sheltered

Loved the gentle sentiment expressed. It is really difficult to accept childre need freedom and the way you express this is so sweet. It would have been really easy to use a more aggressive stance. Well done.

Wonderfully described, simple, gentle plea. I like it.

Good work, I can really relate to this poem, my mom always seems to guard me from everything else in the world, and she just needs to let go a bit.

Yeah, again, exellent poem. i know exactly how you feel.

Another excellent poem! I know how you feel. I feel the same way about my mom. She is SO overprotective!