My Rose

by Rican Chemistry   Dec 11, 2005


Roses are red
The sky is blue
No one will love you
Like I love you

No one will do
What I would do for you
To only hear from your lips
An I love you too

No one will take
So many blows
Where my love ends
No one knows

Roses are red
And my clouds are white
No one will hold you
How I hold you tight

No one can kiss you
And make your lips tremble
You cant ever forget me
You just wont be able

I am your rose
You are my thorn
A drop of blood
And A heart thats torn

I really dont know what I mean with this one....it just came out of me...This is one of my older poems....Just thought I would post it here.

For you Preciosa...

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  • 19 years ago

    by Ladida

    Another beautiful and amazing poem! I'm not sure what you meant when writing this but it meant a lot to me. I think sometimes with poetry it matters how the reader interprets the poem. To me this represented how I wish my ex couldn't forget me and would always want me even if he won't admit it and the last stanza symbolizes how wishing for this hurts. I loved it!

  • 19 years ago

    by dora

    Hey g0od j0b 0n this. well written. thank u f0r the c0mment 0n my p0em. meant al0t

  • 19 years ago

    by TinyDancer46

    I am your rose
    You are my thorn
    A drop of blood
    And A heart thats torn

    I especially love that line...
    You did a fantastic job with this. It's so creative and beautiful

  • Thankz once again...and i know that u be postin this on here cuz of me and marco or me and miguel...and i have to say that i love that u be doin that...i really appreciate it...right now u r a big part in my life...thankz 4 always beein there...
    all i have is love 4 u...