Wow thiz iz a beautiful poem i can relate 2 it a lot keep up tha gud work ur doin gr8!!!!5/5

Awwww wow nice ob on the poem hun keep up the great work 5/5

This was perfect. i think you understand love more than most at your age

Its great... i didnt exactly agree with the last line.... but thats just me .. dont take it the wrong way... just a little constructive critisism.. hope you dont mind.
~David

Awww, you know what, love is the scariest thing there is, but if you surrender to it - it can also be the most rewarding. I know it's deeper than that when someone really is scared of falling in love (trust me I know) but that was my opinion anyway. I currently have my heart broken, but I wouldn't have changed a thing because now I know the feeling that so many others don't get to. Anyway, really well done. I hope to see more of you work, you have really strong writing. Wow!

I can relate to that, in some ways i think it described my boyfriend? maybe him a while ago...
but, love is the base of my life as well, it brings hope and joy, it keeps us going.
love is a beautiful thing,
so happy, yet so devastating

This is a fantastic poem. I really love this part:

What is that feeling by a boy
that makes a girl wanna drown

Excellent words. 5/5.

Tiffany.xox.

I never know who you are anymore....you change your name alot!!!
5/5 on the poems great job....mwah
much love
~Courtney

I like this poem mate. keep writing such sweet loving poems. I love it
xxx
mwah
Love ya love Tara xxxx