This is a really sweet poem. I really like it. By the time I was done reading your poem...I was crying...so, sweet and touching. I know it's really personal, but thanks for sharing. |
by Lu
Oh my Ann this was such a touching piece that has brought me to tears .. |
by Bill Turner
Ann, that is a beautiful and touching poem. I know how hard the holidays are when you lose a parent. My mother died on Thanksgiving 15 years ago and it isn't any easier now than it was ten years ago. What a beautiful way to express your feelings. |
by dora
Mg ann. thats was beautifully written wht a sad t0uching meaningful n em0ti0nal piece. 0h hun very well written. im sure ur mum is s0o pr0ud 0f u!! very well written darl. g0od j0b expressing urself.. =) |
by Jacklyn
Beautiful poem! it's so sad though, your mother sounds like a great strong woman and you were lucky enough to have her. least she's in a pain free place now and gets to see you everyday! wonderful piece. |
by Angie
Ann, I know your momma is proud of you.... and she is watching over you every minute of every day. She will be with you on Christmas as she is with you every day of your life! Keep her spirit and her memory alive in your heart and in all that you do. This is a beautiful and very heartfelt write. Big hugs and lots of love to you......... |
by Razorblade
This was an excellent poem. I'm so sorry about your mom. Stay strong; she'd want you to be! |
Oh Ann, |
by JJ
I've never really experienced coping with the death of a loved one..I guess you could say I'm lucky in a way. my grandmother often talks about death and if anything should happen to her, I don't know what I'd do. I admire your strength and courage. I'm sure your Mom is very proud of you. take care! happy holidays!!! |
by Amber
Tragically exquisite. |
by Natalie84
It's seems like I been away from here for ever. I miss this damn place! The poetry and the people! I so quickly forget the talent within this site...and then I come and kicks me right in the head! lol |
by Laura
Omg when i read this i swear i cried it is soo sad i was balling this is a really good poem its soo sad but im sorry to hear about your mom and im sure gods taking care of her in heven this is a really awesome poem extremely sad omg its sooo good. okay well keep up the good work |
by Ellen
This is such a good poem and i would like to commend you on being such a strong person and never losing your faith. from what you say about your mother in this poem, she seems like a truely strong woan. you must of inherited her strength as well. again, beautiful poem. 5/5!! feel free to check out mine, loving you is my secret and my other one is called take me to the place |