Great job can really relate to it in so many ways. Definitely one of my fav.s

Ohh what a beautiful poem hun... I really loved the creativity you put into this, and how the pain was directed at a different person. Great writing, I love your poems!

Very good, it rymed beatifully..thanks for the comment 5/5

The saddness at a lil girl as interesting
i liked it alot....thx for ur commet...nice work,
love ya lots,
sore