GhoSTs

Nicely done.

You really should capitalize your 'I's though, and watch our for spelling mistakes. It's never a good idea to write poetry with "4" instead of "four" or "nite" instead of "night".

Other than that, it was a unique idea, and I really liked it.

This poem was very creative, but again I see the same errors that I have seen in the last four poems that I have read. I like the poem though because of its creativity, but you should really edit it and capitilize you I's. 5/5 Keep writing hun.

Best wishes
Letty

P.s. I have completed your five poems and I really enjoyed reading your work. If there is anymore that you would like me to comment on leave them in the comments of one of my poems. Keep up the good work, and work on those area's that I commented on.

That was really creative and expressive.... but there was a problem with the flow being together, and depending what way you read it, it didnt click very well

ive seen them since,
forever and ever,
there is two of them,
they r so clever,

i dont think that was one of the stronger stanzas in the poem ,it could have probably been better put.

overall, i gave this a 4/5 because it could use some work. but the concept and the creativity of this poem was up to par!

[in the light,]
This line doesn't really sound right, I think you need to add an extra word in there.

[there is two of them,]
Should be "are" not "is"

[all alone,]
This line is too short and messes up the flow.

[i can feel them near!!]
I think that you can come up with a better last line than this. It sort of messes up a very good poem.

This was very creative and I liked the way you laid it out. Try and fix up spelling and grammer errors and the things I said up there ^ but other than that, very nicely done. 5/5

Its different, I loved it. I love ur poems!! There are awsum!!