This poem was good and came from the heart but some parts were a little off beat....you need to find the rythem in the poem and stick with it....4/5
tay

Wow Jackie, Im sure everything will work out for you. keep you head up high and never give up. This is an awsome poem. I loved it.

~Joe~

Wow...great poem! You are a great person, and the right man will come for u, but for now, you have to wait. Great job..5/5
~Neha

Wow dis was so gwd...i luved it heaps...keep it up..off to read more lo..tc mwaz....gave it a 5/5

Verry good

Venting is the best way to get rid of the pain and I think poetry is a great way to do it. great job here!