Lost in Translation

by rrrrrrr   Dec 12, 2005


I thought one thing, you thought another,
I went one way, you went the other.

I only wanted to be good friends,
You wanted our love to never end.

The bright light that I seek,
Won't even let me take a peek.

To see what lies beyond your innocent smile,
Lets be alone; lets talk for a while.

I can't believe it; I sigh in frustration
All along we were just lost in translation.

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    by rrrrrrr

    Ggeeze guys. does it take that much to write a comment?

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